African mammal hall. The grid is working to a certain extent but watch your corners. I like the variety of text size and the access bars but the body copy seem to be competing against the heading. Bit too big, it seems to be taking away from the image and concept and the leading could be smaller – this is perhaps a good digital rough and if you came to class we might be able to make it a better layout. What is the layout of the address in the bottom left corner? Good photo.
this is a great photo however, the text seems kind of randomly placed.
ReplyDeleteAfrican mammal hall. The grid is working to a certain extent but watch your corners. I like the variety of text size and the access bars but the body copy seem to be competing against the heading. Bit too big, it seems to be taking away from the image and concept and the leading could be smaller – this is perhaps a good digital rough and if you came to class we might be able to make it a better layout. What is the layout of the address in the bottom left corner? Good photo.
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